Saturday, November 14

Outlining Assignment

Haze Problem in Malaysia.

Introduction
 1- Haze is an atmosphere phenomenon where dust, smoke and other particles obscure the clarity of the sky.
2- Haze can be categories into fog, ice fog, steam fog, mist, smoke, volcanic ash, dust, sand and snow.
3- The problem of haze is caused by smoke from factory, and also from by forest fires in Indonesia lately. (BBC News.com, 2015) Because of this, they give many bad effects to the people around Indonesia.

 Body

 Sentence 1 – One of the causes of haze nowadays is open burning in Indonesia. (BBC News.com 2015)

 1- As we know, in Indonesia, every year, they will burn their forest in order to plant another tree and to give their soil health
2- The fires are said to be caused by corporations as well as small-scale farmers who use the slash-and burn method to clear vegetation for palm oil, pulp and paper plantations. (BBC News 2015 3- But the issue has persisted, especially as plantations have expanded, driven in large part by rising global demand for palm oil, a key ingredient in a vast range of everyday consumer products ( abc.net news, 2015)

 Sentence 2- The second causes of haze is smoke from factory. (Infosihat.gov)

1 - Increase many factory and insensitivity the industrial is the main factor the burning of fuels in factories widespread. (WomenOnlineMagazine,my 2014)
 The factories do not install filters on factory chimneys, which resulted in the release of toxic gases, fumes and dust may affect their health problems. (WomenOnlineMagazine,my 2014)

 Sentence 3- Because of this, it has given various adverse health effects to community.

1- Haze particles can affect the heart and lungs, especially in people who already have chronic heart or lung disease e.g. asthma, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), or heart failure. (Ministry of Health Singapore, 2015)
2- Besides that the short term effect also can occur such as throat irritation, dry throat, sore throat and coughing. ( Bliss Air, 2015) Conclusion a)

 Conclusion

To conclude, the bad haze can give our body seriously affected. b) To avoid that happen to our body, we must also take a good care of our family and our self. These issues need to be settle before many serious health problems occur.
 Reference.

- Haze from Indonesia causes Pollution Spike in Malaysia. Retrieved from http://www.abc.net.au/news/2015-09-27/smoke-from-indonesia-causes-air-pollution-spike-in-malaysia/6808080
- Health effects of haze. Retrieved from http://blissair.com/health-effects-of-haze.htm
-Fenomena Jerebu Di Malaysia. Retrieved from http://www.wom.my/kesihatan/fenomena-jerebu-di-malaysia/
 -Press Room. FAQ: Impact of Haze on Health (Updated 20 March 2015). Retrieved from https://www.moh.gov.sg/content/moh_web/home/pressRoom/Current_Issues/2014/haze/faq--impact-of-haze-on-health.html
- What causes South East Asia’s Haze. Retrieved from http://www.bbc.com/news/world-asia-34265922

Saturday, November 14

Outlining Assignment

Haze Problem in Malaysia.

Introduction
 1- Haze is an atmosphere phenomenon where dust, smoke and other particles obscure the clarity of the sky.
2- Haze can be categories into fog, ice fog, steam fog, mist, smoke, volcanic ash, dust, sand and snow.
3- The problem of haze is caused by smoke from factory, and also from by forest fires in Indonesia lately. (BBC News.com, 2015) Because of this, they give many bad effects to the people around Indonesia.

 Body

 Sentence 1 – One of the causes of haze nowadays is open burning in Indonesia. (BBC News.com 2015)

 1- As we know, in Indonesia, every year, they will burn their forest in order to plant another tree and to give their soil health
2- The fires are said to be caused by corporations as well as small-scale farmers who use the slash-and burn method to clear vegetation for palm oil, pulp and paper plantations. (BBC News 2015 3- But the issue has persisted, especially as plantations have expanded, driven in large part by rising global demand for palm oil, a key ingredient in a vast range of everyday consumer products ( abc.net news, 2015)

 Sentence 2- The second causes of haze is smoke from factory. (Infosihat.gov)

1 - Increase many factory and insensitivity the industrial is the main factor the burning of fuels in factories widespread. (WomenOnlineMagazine,my 2014)
 The factories do not install filters on factory chimneys, which resulted in the release of toxic gases, fumes and dust may affect their health problems. (WomenOnlineMagazine,my 2014)

 Sentence 3- Because of this, it has given various adverse health effects to community.

1- Haze particles can affect the heart and lungs, especially in people who already have chronic heart or lung disease e.g. asthma, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD), or heart failure. (Ministry of Health Singapore, 2015)
2- Besides that the short term effect also can occur such as throat irritation, dry throat, sore throat and coughing. ( Bliss Air, 2015) Conclusion a)

 Conclusion

To conclude, the bad haze can give our body seriously affected. b) To avoid that happen to our body, we must also take a good care of our family and our self. These issues need to be settle before many serious health problems occur.
 Reference.

- Haze from Indonesia causes Pollution Spike in Malaysia. Retrieved from http://www.abc.net.au/news/2015-09-27/smoke-from-indonesia-causes-air-pollution-spike-in-malaysia/6808080
- Health effects of haze. Retrieved from http://blissair.com/health-effects-of-haze.htm
-Fenomena Jerebu Di Malaysia. Retrieved from http://www.wom.my/kesihatan/fenomena-jerebu-di-malaysia/
 -Press Room. FAQ: Impact of Haze on Health (Updated 20 March 2015). Retrieved from https://www.moh.gov.sg/content/moh_web/home/pressRoom/Current_Issues/2014/haze/faq--impact-of-haze-on-health.html
- What causes South East Asia’s Haze. Retrieved from http://www.bbc.com/news/world-asia-34265922